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YEY. My writing :3

Post  Melissa on Tue Oct 04, 2011 12:16 am

YEY. FORUM ENTERTAINMENT SECTION. <3
OKAY, I AM GOING TO POST POEMS HERE.
c:
And a song (only lyrics)
I have quite a few poems, I also have two paragraphs from a story I started writing (It was the prologue)

We Can All Pull Through
Everything happens for a reason,
Whatever that reason may be,
Keep your head high,
Your hopes up,
Stay positive,
We’ll all pull through,
Not everyone is fortunate,
But stay positive,
Everything will be alright,
We can all pull through this nightmare called life,
Keep your head up,
Your hopes high,
Stay positive,
We can all pull through,
Life is too short for regrets.
Apologize,
Love deeply,
Care passionately,
Stay alive.

Forever Love
With one touch, one breath
The smell of you lingers on my skin
I ache for your love
Time passes by without a second to say
I love you,
Day and night times with you
Rush through my mind
And your gentle smile warms my heart
Our love is pure, and unforgetable
And with just one more kiss
From those lucious lips
I say goodbye to my forever love

(This is the song lyrics)
I've Finally Found You
Well it’s been a long journey…. But I’ve finally found you. You were the one that I have been dreaming of all this time. I have been with many others but none of them were like you. You were the one who caught my heart. You stood out unlike any other.
You were the one who kissed me like it was meant to be.
You were the one who held me like I was in heaven.
You made me feel free, as if I could be me. You understand what I need; you cheer me up when I’m down. You always tell me that you’re there for me, and now I finally believe you. I’ve been rewarded with your love. That fills me with joy. Seeing you just makes me smile, you don’t need to say anything to make me happy on even the worst days.
You’ve never kept me on the sidelines, you’ve always had me first in line.
You’ve never left me back in the dust, unlike the rest of them do. You’ve always been my one and only
You’re my guardian angel; you’ve lifted me up into the heavens. Higher than all the rest. I’ve finally found you. You were there when all my hopes were gone. You helped me believe in myself, even when nobody else could. I’ve finally found you. All the joy and happiness is back.
My world has everything I need when you’re with me. You’re the one that I need, the one that I want.
I’ll always have a hard time letting go of you. Hopefully I won’t ever have to though.
Do you have the same feelings like I have for you? Because I don’t know how you feel. These feelings have taken over me. I’ve tried my best to not let it show.
I’ve finally found you.
Just so you know, I’ve written your name in my heart, and it will stay there forever no matter what.
I’ve finally found someone that likes the same things, and that is always there in the middle of the night when I wake up screaming. I deserve nothing but the best, and I’ve finally found you.
You’re the one who always picks me up when I was down.
How can I sleep when I’m not with you, all I do when I’m not with you is think of you.
I’m here thinking, I’m going to go insane without you. What am I to do without you?
Don’t go breaking my heart for a girl that doesn’t even care.
I think I’ve found my heart and soul now that I’m with you.
I’m handing you my heart, please take great care of it when I’m not with you. I’ve finally found you
This was a song that a friend & I wrote last year.
It's not the best, but I like it.

Haven
Her day is full of teasing, taunting, tittering,
She hears the whispers, and sees the hostility aimed her way,
She misses out on all the jokes and parties,
If you talk to her, she is a sunrise, colorful, animated, and happy,
But inside, her world is full of shadow,
Yet she tries to ignore the rumors, the snide remarks, and the malicious stares,
She arrives home and is an actress, discussing how great her day was,
Cleverly painting a pretty picture for her parents,
Her homework waits for her,
When the battle is over, she slowly trudges up the creaking wooden stairs,
Thud, Thud, Thud, Thud, her footsteps as she approaches her favorite part of the day,
She reaches out her left hand to touch the polished, cold handle,
The handle is swiftly turned,
The door opened with a small scream of protest and alas, she is there,
She feels along the wall and turns on the light, and her sanctuary is illuminated,
The room smells of flowers and vanilla, heaven to her,
It is toasty warm and comforting,
She walks in and closes the door behind her,
Her disguise is slowly being removed,
She slides off her shoes and sits on her bed,
She lies back on her fluffy pillows, and slowly buries herself deep in the blankets,
The warmth that comes to her is paradise, the one good part of her day,
Her blankets smell fresh and clean, and she replays her whole day,
It is in those few moments that she lets go,
Heavy tears flood her eyes, and slowly begin to dot her pillow,
She loves this place though because she can be herself,
She knows that reality is an ugly thing,
But she will be okay, so long as she has her haven.

Gone Like The Wind
You were gone like the wind
Before I noticed you were gone
Never to be back again
I never saw your face
I never heard your voice
I always dreamt of being by your side
Gone like the wind, there was nothing
You were the only one that I loved then
Now, I don't think I feel the same
You were gone like the wind
You came and went, you left with no sign
Without even saying goodbye
I waited so long for you
I tried to keep my cool
Now thinking of you
I lost all control
Gone like the wind
I never saw your face again
I started to say
I'd never see you back someday
Gone like the wind
You came and went
Once again
Let me say this once for you
I'll love you till death
Gone like the wind
You came and went
Days go by
With no sign of you left
Just gone like the wind
Is all I could say

(This is the paragraph)
And so there I was, standing in an open field, with nothing but the grass blowing around my ankles wildly while the wind hit every individual blade. I felt someone’s breath across my neck, but I wasn’t sure who, or what it was. I stood there motionless, thinking if I stood still long enough, the breath that was so soothing across my neck would seize. It seemed like forever was going by, and the breath never left me. I turned around finally, and I saw that nobody was there. "Was there anyone even there to begin with?" I pondered over it for a minute, then I started walking towards the edge of the field back to where my truck was waiting. The breath started again, and I stood as if I was just frozen and I couldn’t move. I tried moving again, but whatever was holding me there, wasn’t touching me. "What is happening to me?" I pondered over it in my mind, I tried moving again, and this time I got into the woods, where I thought I was safe. Then out of nowhere, a man fell out of the tree. I jumped; the man had short caramel brown hair, almost bronze. His eyes were the color of golden brown. He looked to be about 6’3” at the least. I bent down and looked closer, then, the cool breath ran across my neck again. I ran my eyes over the man’s body, no scrapes, and no cuts. "Why isn’t he hurt? Where did he come from?" Those were questions I wanted answers to.

Believing In You
I started to believe
I started believing you loved me
You started to come around more often
I started believing in you
You called me baby
You told me I was yours
You told me I was your reason to live
I started believing in you
You stopped coming around one day
You just stopped talking to me
I thought I did something was wrong
I then realized, believing in you
Was a huge mistake
I realized you were only using me
I knocked on your door
To see what you had to say
You just said
“I’m busy, talk to you later.”
I left, I went home
I waited far too long
To believe I really meant something to you
Believing in you was the wrong choice
I believed you loved me,
I believed you cared
I even believed all the lies you said
I loved you,
You loved her
You hated me…
Why’d you do it?
Why did you have me believe in you?
I believed in you, because I thought you were different
It looks like,
I was dead up wrong
Believing in you,
Was the stupidest mistake I’ve made
I believed in you from the start
I was so gullible
Why did you do it?
Why?
I loved you…
Goodbye…
Forever
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Re: YEY. My writing :3

Post  Chris on Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:37 am

So Long that i didnt bother to read F3
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Re: YEY. My writing :3

Post  Tran on Tue Oct 04, 2011 3:16 am

I know The Raven's first stanza. c:

The Raven

One upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and wreary, over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore --
While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping, as of someone gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door.
"Tis' some visitor" I muttered, "only this and nothing more."





LOL, not sure if it is right. Had to remember it for English class.
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Re: YEY. My writing :3

Post  Melissa on Tue Oct 04, 2011 3:33 am

Chrisyoumeanie </3

Tran, I think thats right. Ill look it up and tell you.
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Re: YEY. My writing :3

Post  Sene on Wed Oct 05, 2011 1:05 am

Wow what a long poem. Its quite lovely, ill be sure to take my time and check it out. Good work Smile

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Re: YEY. My writing :3

Post  Chris on Wed Oct 05, 2011 2:33 am

I'm not being purposefully mean..Just telling the truth F3
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Re: YEY. My writing :3

Post  Melissa on Wed Oct 05, 2011 3:08 am

@Sene; theres actually multiple pieces of my writing there


@Chris; you could at least read them one at a time .-.
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